Lost Soul

  • Genre: Other
  • Author: Vladimirivan,WhiteOx
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  • Status: Ongoing

  • Rating(4.3 / 5.0)

Souls, the most important part of the body. The spiritual entity that gives life to a person, and where its conscience is stored. They give the person character, dictating everything that a person was, is, and will be, all stored in a lifeless husk called the body.

A body without a soul, is dead. But a soul without a body, is lost.

There are pure souls, and then there are impure souls. Souls that have negative effects on both the spiritual and material worlds. These impire souls are then labeled as demons.

Thus the Demon Extermination Group was formed. A group of people who have access to the both worlds who are capable of killing these demons. Be it through exorcism, or through soul destruction, they get the job done.

This is just a short story that I made in order to train myself on writing my future novels and whatnot. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated in order to improve my writing style.

Cheers!

I post chapters when I can, so no strict schedule.

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  1. QueenOfChaos
    QueenOfChaos rated it
    ate bakit hindi mo to I exclusive? sayang ganda pa naman ng plot
  1. Inevitable_Chicken
    I am up to date on the story. I can say that it is a good story. A good job has been done. The characters, the development, the world are all good enough. I can't say that I experienced any boredom while reading it. You certainly did a good job.  As for the suggestion part, I think it is not right to constantly assign an adjective to predicates. For example, "I'm leaving." his voice was harsh. It is normal to use this at the beginning, but as the story progresses and we get to know the character, the reader should be able to understand such things. Of course, you are the author, the decision is yours. Finally, I wonder how long the story will be, it seems like there are strange events that can be told.
  1. Genesiswriter
    Genesiswriter rated it
    I am one of those mixed bag peeps on this while I love this is a sea based and structured type of story and not against that while being a system does make it neat. I hope to see how this story will pick up cause while that pic is enticing I am wondering what to expect. I plan to go into this more just need more time to figure out if I dig this or not. So far is interesting at least. :3
  1. DjinnofNovel
    DjinnofNovel rated it
    Judging by the hole in the satellite picture
  1. Free1198
    Free1198 rated it
    Within a few minutes, she came back with some orange juice and placed it on his tray.
  1. SwampyNymph
    SwampyNymph rated it
    For too long has it watched its Host suffer from unrequited love and dying painfully. This originally loving system had slowly blackened. What is love? Can it be eaten?
  1. Marvsalab
    Marvsalab rated it
    Sell (Materials,weapons,ore, converts them to system points)
  1. Adil_Hensley
    Adil_Hensley rated it
    "Well, time to find out where I'm at," Alex said looking at the ancient ash tree before turning in the opposite direction and leaving.

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