Here Comes The Lady Chef

I won't spoil the story... So here is a overview. The Story definately has potential I see its still in its early stages and there are some grammer issuses but plot wise I love it... sure its a bit typical but enjoyable and keeps you entertained. So i recommend it

I CAN FEEL HIS RAGE!I CAN FEEL HIS VENGEANCEBLOODFORTHE BLOOD GOD!

So, you came down here to get an idea of what to expect, did you? Or did you want to leave a review like the others? Either way, you have my deepest and sincerest gratitude for taking interest in UOT!Now then, if you came here to get an idea of what to expect, allow me to extend my hand forward and attempt a good first impression. If you didn't, why are you still here? Go read my chapters, will you?! Anyway...First things first, there won't be a harem for the MC. I'm not interested in writing that. However, you will get to see some plot relevant NSFW content.Secondly... Expect to see a dynamic cast of characters that changes and grows as the plot progresses. With characters you'll adore, characters you'll hate, and characters that make you feel some odd mix of both.And lastly... Expect an in depth look into how everything works in this story. I spent a very VERY long time working on the foundation of the story before I even got to the plot, so I hope you enjoy learning about it as much as I enjoyed creating it.Now, with all that said and done...I'll see you at the latest chapter.

can you please fasten the story development and fixe the da*n MC mentality

The concept is interesting, the characters are unique, and the grammar is quite good. There are only slight issues with flow and repetitiveness that should resolve as the author gets into the swing of the story.

Fungus symbolizes purity, look how God put those fungus in our butt.

They resumed the job of cleaning the walls It didn't take long, it was clear the enemy just left them here to gain some time for them to find Robert and finish the job, they clearly didn't have any hopes of winning this fight, but they were trying to at least make this, not a complete failure. After ending his job in the walls Max and his entourage went searching for a high point from where support the units that were fighting in the town square.

The next day as I enter the room I found Miyano.