Heavenly Pleasure

please upload more chapters i love this man please speedup

Just a short story, yet so captivating. Try it out and let me know what you think 😊💙Yours__ the Blue Lady💙

A story of a war maiden and the sin of gluttony.....I think. I can see how much potential it has especially with a beginning like that. It's an interesting story, though grammatical errors and words structures are off on almost every chapter.  The story is interesting overall. and I recommend Grammarly app for editing

I tend to not review things, cuz I never could be bothered by such a trivial thing to do when I'm immersed in a novel, But this one deserved it.I just finished Chap 22, And I just wanted to post a review before going to sleep.So this is a refresher. After all the brain rot novels, manga, manhwas and manhuas this is a change of sides of the leaf. It has a traditional style to it.  And good development too. Tomorrow Ill binge read the remaining or ill wait a while for it to brew and read it all at once.I recommend it to anyone who is browsing this and is scared to read it because of its low numbers of reviews, or thinking of this as a troll novel. Its not a troll and is actually a really good read.Keep it up author, If you ever feel down thinking no one is appreciating your work. Just remember I am supporting and rooting for you and am hoping to read more of this novel. So keep your head up man you've created something good.

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With a gasp, his brain shut down, the light in his eyes dying and his body slumping lifelessly onto the cradle with a loud clang.

'Mengetahui dan Melakukan Menjadi Satu', Wang Yangming, pernah belajar di dalam jangkauan gunung ini. Selama berabad-abad, tempat itu memiliki ketenaran yang sama dengan studi Li Bai.

Please quick update thanks