Getting power IRL is expensive

A gem that doesn't get much attention sadly, this story is by far better than most top stories so far if not the best. Even blood warlock can't compete, its just that this is a first for the author so not much attention is given. The difference povs, the feeling of every charecter havin their own mc introduced is jaw dropping. author is a takanted individual that could make anything out of nothing.

I guess this can be considered a shoutout for LostSoldier1.

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After that Leutenant Commander Gina gone to his room in the entrance.

"And that is the problem," she continued, beginning to walk between us all now. "You are only trained with the knowledge of your own mythology. You stay within your groups and within your walls. Now, there are reasons for that. Amos Kane brought this point up when I first proposed the making of this college. It is simply too dangerous, sometimes, to get all of you together in one place. It causes chaos. But with some help from Sadie and Carter Kane, we have established barriers like the one around Camp Half-Blood to keep monsters and mortals out. But this will not protect everyone on its own. You will also have to be able to defend yourselves on your own."

"The time when you punched Seii, after covering like 3 steps in a millisecond, super speed, duh"

The world background is frustrating and confusing. Readers will spend a lot of time wondering where the setting is (it’s not explained until pretty far into the story).The most frustrating thing about the story is the knock-offs of existing work. He releases The Halfling (The Hobbit) with Filbo Fabbins (Bilbo Baggins) as the main character. Every non-original song has the song title and lyrics altered in a way that’s  disorienting and confusing. I guarantee you most of the readers googled the lyrics to see which song it is. It takes you out of the immersive experience. If you’re going to rip something off, you might as well be honest about it. I don’t know if the author is trying to avoid copyright strikes or whatever, but you can safely reference existing works as long as you properly cite it. Even using lyrics would be fine, it’s considered fair use.The language is stilted. You can tell the author speaks English as a second language. This is far from the worst story on Webnovel though. But…It often comes off as word salad. Especially the chapter titles (it looks like Mad Libs sometimes).The names of the MC and the supporting characters are awful - they’re not memorable in a literary sense. The other thing that bothers me is that this is a novel that requires payment. Given all of the problems with the story, I don’t think this rises to the level of a work requiring payment. I’m not trying to discourage the author. In fact, if he fixes what I suggested, I’d revise the rating to 4.5/5 stars. It’s an interesting premise and can be engaging.

Generally a good novel. The system is unique and not super op. I like how it gives common items that are turned special instead of tons of op skills. Also its a nice calming peaceful story written well.