Disciple of a Demon

So I finished reading this story until the last chapter (Ch 9)First of all, first two chapters could use a little of Max monologue (just a little). His world seemed silent to me. I feel disconnected with MC in the first chapter.I love how the author trying to describe the sadness of losing someone, it's heartbreaking I'd give points to that. But I wish in that moment we could also know more what he was thinking..his feelings..maybe try to show how the deep connection he has with his brother in the first two chapters..But... from ch 3, then that's when it gets interesting. To me the story fly after this chapter. So if you plan on reading, don't give up on the first two, cause you won't be disappointed, cause I didn't. Overall, this is a diamond in the rough. Yes it needs polishing, but if u ask me is it worth reading? My answer: Yes.

A very interesting  read. Though the genre and style seems common the author strongly emphasizes story and character development. The author strikes a great balance between the otherworld life and the "real" life in the novel which is the key to writing in the dual life genre.The setting and world building need a little work because theyre too generic and very little is written about them. Just a city and a village. Needs time, culture, and technological settings at least. Magic is there but to what extent? Theres too many basic questions left unanswered for 200 chapters.The MC is written well as a person and has so far (200chapters) developed well in character. His persona as a struggling person is deeply rooted and not awkward or forced which is reflected well in his speech to choices and distrust of people. +points for well written desperation and seething anger.Though he is given OP skills his actions are not really too absurd and does not take the reader out of immersion. The author does fall into the summoner having too much summons that they become forgettable trap, it seems like the author is holding himself back for now.Side characters are written very well. The sister gives life to the MC and showcases his more familial and caring side. She herself highlights both their backgrounds and motivations. A well written character that provides impetus for the MC to improve himselve and strive for something more.The first opponent provided a satisfying and believeable character arc. A cliche that was believeable and satisying even if a cliche.The main antagonists are capable, smart, uncaring, self-righteous, and provide a satisfying foil to the MC. The hero can only be as good as the villains he defeats and the villains make you love to hate them.Though the story, setting, and some elements are predictable, the style and characters make this story fresh and an easy good read.

Just finished reading the 63 chapters and I'll be waiting for the new chapter releases. I'm hooked on the FL's relationship with the 3 ML's. Kicks off around Ch 10. She's so cute and she's driving these boys crazy. I'm voting for the Prince. They would be sizzling together!!!  Hope it gets picked up - need more chapters now pls author!!!

here to return your 5 star review on my work that i havent even started since the word count chapter.                                                   

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

"Now it's time for my beloved Thousand Falling Comet Technique to shine!" said Yuu as he took out the comets and the Technique from his Spatial Ring

Some of them were useless,causing me to commit suicide as I didn't want to do things the hard way.