Anachronism

The first chapter was intriguing. The way u convey how the MC was being bullied.. his expression and thought about it was on point. And I liked the fact that you added mystery in every chapter making people guessing what is this? Why? It makes me scroll to the next and the next until I ended up reading to the last chapter ... damn you made me lose time on writing my story. LOLOverall, despite ur confusing me, I still read it. So I'm giving you a full  5 star. Because U managed to magic ur way to my curiosity.

Honestly it was good 💯 . Waiting for the upcoming novels . Story was great 👍. I hope you will be a successful writer in the future 😉.....................

Ye Mu Xi dapat melihat Liao Dan Yi dari arah jauh, memang tempat mereka agak jauh, tapi masih terlihat.

"Like you, all heard we have transfer students. Please show them your respect, Yuki, Shiro you may come in"  Then the class replies, "two of them?" As Yuki and Shiro walk in the class looks in awe at the twins. Studying ever detail of each of them, Yuki with her beautiful long silky white hair all the way past her butt, with her pale skin as pale as snow and rosy cheeks, slim body, with her big blue eyes. Shiro with his messy white bed hair, long legs,  muscular body l, and his identical blue eyes. The class stays quiet as Yuki and Shiro introduce themselves, "Hi, I'm Yuki Tanabachi". "Hello, I'm Shiro". The teacher then replies, " Welcome Shiro, Yuki, tell us a little about yourself". Yuki replies, "Of course, as you can tell we are twins l, fraternal, ummmm we live with our older brother who works at this very school". " oh yes, Mr.  Tanabachi, he tells us teachers so much about you two its a pleasure to have you in my class" interrupts the teacher. Shiro then replies, " ohh has he now. Also, one thing just to get this clear so we don't have another accident as we did at our old school.." Yuki then cuts him off by pulling his shirt and shaking her head to tell him to stop, but Shiro shakes her off and continues, "By all means please spread this around the school if anyone even lays a finger on my sister your dead, do we have an understanding?" As Shiro states this information he looks at the class with a frightening look in his eyes. The class replies to this with a shiver down their spine and big eyes to show their scared. Then Shiro smiles at them with the most cunning look and says, "Hope we can get along, I can't wait to have fun with all of you"

I respect that. I hate those not acknowledging the rules of the universe they write about.

This thing is funny but work on ur writhing

Priest :... As it is written that love is the principle thing, in all you do, do it in love ~Amen

Vanessa:(bumolong)Mr.blahblah wag ako:)