Zero Soul

Synopsis and title is good to start with. Story development and character design were upto the mark..
I just want to give a piece of advice as well, just try to separate dialogues from the narrative paragraphs and do work on your grammar a bit. Do your best to stay in past tense.
Overall, It was such a good read! I am rooting for you, Author. Do wonders!

It's a beautiful story to start a read. well written and keep you captured. It engages your mind and touches your soul. The storyline unique and well define of characters. Good job author

I really like this novel. The story progression is awesome. And the characters are really unique. Keep up the good work author. I hope to see more chapters uploaded

Nice plot l must say .... Author hasn't upload more but still l can say that l is a very interesting story that everyone should try reading...
All the best author and plzzz do upload a lot and so that l can read more

The author has a good storyline and I'm glad to be  have read this piece.  It's off with a good start and I can't wait to read more chapters. Are you looking for fantasy novels? Be sure to check this out,  you won't be disappointed.

Oh am really enjoying this book of yours the characters are great,t the plot and the writing style is good keep it up author,I have add to my library for update

Vampire, yeah I really enjoyed every story who have a vampire in it. But this story is different, i don't know why but this story feel really special

I really enjoyed how the author make this story, how the author shape the world of this story and how the author create nice pace on the plot.