Vampires, Creatures that only exist in books and movies but, that all changed since the great tragedy 50 years ago. 90 percent of the human population has partially turned into vampires and those who fail to adapt are turned into ghouls which are predatory creatures that are thirsty for fresh blood. Now humans build great walls to protect them from threats that were originally only fictitious now become real threats.
Five years ago the walls of mankind were breached by the vampires and caused many victims to fall, Luke who witnessed his family being massacred and saw his younger sister kidnapped by the vampires. Luke joins an army of vampire hunters and is determined to go on an expedition beyond the walls into vampire territory to save his sister and eradicate the vampires from this world.
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Your grammar is passable, although I would personally refrain from using the passive voice as much as you do. It makes sentences clunky, vague and awkward. So if you can change the subject of the sentence in order to rewrite it in active voice without this changing your meaning, I advise you to do so.
There is an absence of rhythm in your writing. I’m aware it isn’t easy to write with rhythm, and personally, I struggle with it as well, but try to bring some more rhythm to your paragraphs.
The dialogue is clear, but sometimes it comes across a a bit forced.
Overall, I believe your work holds a lot of potential. I wish you luck!
you did an amazing work here. this novel is not to be missed by any.
I don't know but I like Vampire novels and this one also got me .