The light novel is great however the romance is absolutely horrible. Are you telling me any woman who stays with the mc for a few years and comes to like him will suddenly become the mc’s ‘dao heart’ and ‘taboo for any enemies to speak her name’????? Wtf is this I thought the mc is a ruthless mc not a softhearted guy who can’t bear to leave a woman just because she likes him and got Stockholm syndrome. The only reason she became the mc’s girlfriend is because it’ll be really pitiful if she doesn’t. The only thing she does for the mc is to make pills but still schemes against him. The mc is supposedly ruthless so why didn’t he just turn her into a puppet after all the times she tries to kill him and ends up ‘being more important than his own life’ since she comes to like him, why does he have a love life anyways if he’s so ruthless, he’ll just end up getting a burden. I like how his girlfriend has no unique qualities and has done barely anything for him. The author is absolutely horrible at creating romance, pretty much like his other light novels.
The book is good and I can see that this author is inexperienced but kudos to you for at least starting something and hope you keep up the good work 🤩🤩🤩🤩
this is a fascinating novel with cold blooded mc , and an awesome world building ,currently my favourite novel out there for cultivating daoist, you could gain insights while reading this novel
The author has put a lot of effort into writing this, and he even rewrote the first few chapters several times. However, I recommend he get a proofreader, because while everything is readable, some syntax errors are very distracting to the reader. Besides that, I think the author has a very unique writing style that is amusing to read. Personally, I think his writing is a lot like how he texts in real life with his friends, and I think that this allowed many readers to feel closer to the narrator. A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.
So what if this story is written by others. Thanks to this author we get to read it in web novel. Yes it's not his/her personal created work, but seriouslt i don't want to pay 60 $ in amazon for vol 13. I can happily pay 20 $ for it.
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A very fun read. Fun enough that I can gloss over the fact that every time a word should be translated as now with the connotation of (present, right away, happening right now) it is translated as not with the meaning or connotation of (opposite, impossible, not happening right now).This isn't confusing in this novel like it is in others because Not is never used correctly and now never comes up. Just read each Not as Now and it all makes sense.Spell check was used, at least in the earlier chapters. But it didn't fix any incorrect word replacement errors. The smarter auto-correct gets, the more evil the incorrect words become when it fixes things to be wrong. This whole book needs edited by a human.
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