you shine - KOL MIKAELSON [1]

I'll be honest it's okay, just okay, however if you are someone who usually reads stories about reincarnation into the past then this story will not make sense to you, I mean the major thing about being born into the past is the information on how to proceed with the present, however in this novel the mc knows little to nothing about the past it's as if it was not his life at all, firstly unless he contributed to a major butterfly effect that caused a huge effect on the events that are to happen of which he did not then this means that the author of this novel is not knowledgeable with things pertaining to time travel, I mean the mc should know the events that are happening around him because he has already experienced them however he does not which means his life has changed, how, what happened that caused this major inconsistency with the the timeline? I mean will start with his first case, he says he heard about it in his previous life that means it was originally not assigned to him, what changed that made him get this new case? We are not shown anything in this story, inconsistency 1. Secondly, he does not know his teammates which means he was not assigned to this team previous or the teammates from the past changed, what exactly is happening here? I mean not unless the mc altered the timeline knowingly which should have been revealed to the readers then the time paradox in this story does not make sense at all. All the events are killing the idea that the mc time traveled which in turn will have a major butterfly effect. The butterfly effect should not have come before even the mc altered the course of time. As such for me who picked up because of the time travel reason, I am completely disappointed in this novel.

An excellent addition in the sci-fi genre. All those who has taste for sci-fi reading, come grab the book. As for me I am going to keep it my library for sure.

A well structured storyline. It never failed to intrigue me of what's happening next. The concept too was very eye catching. I await to see more chapters!

Good work author👍👍👍Amazing work, love the way you explained your characters so well . Can't wait to read more of you work,  keep posting .

i am still in the process of seeing if i truly love this novel so this is not a good review but overall i do see me enjoying this novel if it continues like it is. good job author i hope to see more

~flash back~

After killing my Birth mother and her family it gained the 3rd Tomoe.

• Sage Mode/ Control of Natural Chakra