You Choose an Adopted Son, I Choose Madness

Yes am shameless I like giving my books the best rate🙈, this is my second book and it's super short but what are your thoughts about the story?.

Simple words  I like the story and you should try you will love

Just started this story a few days ago and have to say, it's overall pretty good. Starting off with the merits would obviously include the fact the the MC is a villian so if you're looking for that, you'll get it here, the power system in the story has quite a bit of potential to be pretty interesting if the author goes more into it and the side characters at least by ch 31 so far seem to be interesting enough and they're not just useless backround characters. Though it does have it's demerits, one of which would include the story pace being a bit too fast at least earlier in the novel and due to that some of the formed character relationships in the story seem a bit abrupt and out of place for a bit. Also the fact the at least as far as i've read (chapter 31), the first few numbered chapters can nearly be skipped with the only real relavance they've had in the sotry being explaing the MC's personality a bit. Though overall it's a pretty good novel so far. But i'll have to keep reading to see if it gets any better in the future as it does a some potential.

The story telling is nice and the way the story develops in the book is interesting. Author has a good writing style. Readers should give this book a try.

okay it's good story with good pace and the starting is good I almost about to read the spoiler chapter 🤣 keep it up