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the novel is quite good and enjoyable to read. but I gotta say that the world building is not quite there yet. It is quite confusing how each fraction in this novel operates due to its sudden introduction with little context. Sometimes I even wonder why the author even bothers to introduce them since it serves little purpose to the main protagonist. One little thing that bothers me is the names of the characters in this novel. Some seem to  have their names from the European side and some from the China side which I think is quite inconsistent with the theme of cultivation or culture in the world.but overall if you can look past these flaws. It's still a good read.

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I do not mind clichés as long as it is done right. This novel sadly doesn't do that at all. The cultivation system was intriguing, that is the only redeeming feature of this novel. The MC is very naive and ignorant of everything so he is easy to get manipulated and easily attaches great importance to people who are exploiting him for their own benefits due to his heaven defying talent. You would think because of regularly the author highlights how talented he is, he would not be targeted by his clan but no there's always conflicts between him and the other members. One gets defeated, there is a reaction and recurring misunderstanding then the dad/brother/uncle show up. Also nobody really helps their most talented member. Even when he is in trouble they wanna see how far he can go and what are his secret cards are. I got very irritated in short.

Always been eagerly waiting for the new novels by this author.😍 I must say your unique titles and characters never fail to captivate me.❤️ Inspired by ur works dear Author💕I Read only a  few chapters but couldn't stop myself to leave a review. I am wondering if I should leave a spoiler but don't want spoil the fun lol 😂 A must read novel,,,, U like sci-fic Then what r u waiting for? add this book to ur library n start reading😍 Lots of love to the author!!🥰

Firstly, the writing quality is above average, the humour being a nice touch.Secondly, The story developent is amazing, alrhough background and description of the surrounding area as well as shock factor from transmigration can be improved.Since my second point comes close to the subject of world building, I will address the world background. Although the qi and spiritual points were addressed, I feel like explanations on the jobs of shaman can be addressed too. Additional information on different qi levels could be addresed so as to know the setting (ie. cultivation world) better. Elaborating on the positions in the sect which XY’s father is the head of would be great too. Different creatures and the grading of items can also be elaborated on.Since world background also touches o  character design, this webnovel is quite good at that. Although, as with any other webnovel, there are some slight problems in understanding the charaxter of XY’s siblings and who is eldest, et cetera.Lastly, UPDATING STABILITY. If you came for chapters, mass releases and similar, you will be disappointed. This book has not updated in 5 months (at this time) and most likely will not update for a long time. I pray that the author will release more chapters soon.AHHHH, who the hell am I kidding. I am doing this on my phone a week after GRADUATING EXAMS. I AM BEGGING RHE AUTHOR, PLEASE UPDATE FOR MY SANITY, THIS BOOK IS *GNIQUF* AMAZING SO....dlrow siht quF

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Incidentally, when you get into these gray-area titles, there seems to be no consensus on whether they should be in quotation marks or italics. I'm using italics. Partly because they are longer than short stories, but mostly because book publishers generally italicize them so that they appear to be full-fledged novels.