World With You

  Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Awesome write, I enjoyed it, awesome dialogue, really good world setting and its compelling enough to hook me right from the start, will add it to library, just keep uploading more for the sake of my curiosity please

Yes I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 star. so you guys feel free to comment anything you feel about the story, the pacing or the plot later on the story.

Hi guys, it's the Author here shamelessly giving the first review😂I've been plotting this book for sometime now and finally had the courage to post it. And I definitely hope you'll like it xD it would mean a lot!! So yeah this is basically Elliot on his journey from a weak to strong mage along with a possessive Demon Lord as a husband and a one in a million system dungeon....So join him on this journey of navigating his life with the threatening impending doom that threatens to destroy the mortal realm.I really hope you enjoy this book and if you do please support me with gifts, powerstones, and golden tickets they'll help a lot and as a reward I'll realease extra chapters.꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡

The novel is interesting and the beginning is good. The character of the hero is wonderful, with a focus on the rest of the characters and the world and the interaction between them as well.