Terrible beginning, lazy writing, and lack of originality. MC reminds me of those beta protagonists commonly found in Japanese LN. Actually, the entire novel resembles a Japanese LN. I wouldn’t be surprised if this is a badly done copy of it, but I lack the ability to continue reading this disappointment.I really wanted to like this since many of my fellow daoists kept urging me to try it, but I’m utterly disappointed.This is a piece of garbage. Don’t waste your time.
" RUN!!!" I scream as Moonlight begins to crash out of the throne room. I heave the Sleeping supplies, food and other things up with me. He crashes thru the wall. Bricks litter the saddle. One hits my knee. I yell in pain. Moonlight replies from the mind link that he is sorry. He runs. He calls something out in dragon tongue. He begins to break a window. He fly's out of the window howling in pain as some peaces of glass cut his soft scales. I gasp as we fly above the castle behind it. There is a new building. It is huge. Smaller than the castle so it was hidden. He swoops down.
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