World-Class Comfort

I have enjoyed the story so far but there is one thing that constantly pulls me out of the immersion.  "Spoilers" His father's willingness to kill him after only two weeks because his little brother didn't adapt to be the heir instantly and went against his will.  No other forms of punishment or exile just have him killed.  Then the lukewarm response from everyone when they find out what happened.  "You possibly murdered your son and stole his abilities for the other son how dare you!  No, I just had him killed by leaving him to die.  Oh, that's okay then."  "My poor son is dead, but after blowing up at my husband once, I still miss my son but get all lovey dovey on my husband whenever I see him.  Even if you say he is a family leader who has to be strict to protect humanity, the fact that not a single character seems to more than mildly disagrees with him and even reveres him just feels jarring.

Delicious. Stand proud, Forteller. You can cook.

Sesampainya didepan pintu kayu berwarna coklat tersebut rajendra mengetuk pintu dengan perlahan.

         Alam ko ngayon lang tayo nagkatagpo.....(I know we have just met)

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Scire, a good kingdom. If only you could bring yourself to believe in The Arts, maybe we could come at a resolution.

Until now (for me) this novel is perfect. I´ve read many novels on webnovel and most of them aren´t as well written as this. This novel just seems so unbelievable good thougt through and realistic in terms of the decisions the main character makes and how situations unfold. Thank you for your work author, i think your novel has really great potential! Many greetings

Honestly I haven't read the story yet but I saw in the description that there was no romance. The fact that there is no romance and it is stated in the description and guaranteed deserves a five star review in and of itself. The yell of excitement I give when I saw that was hilarious. The amount  of times I've had to stop reading a good story because they introduce romance makes me weep. So thank you Author. I dont start a story until at least fifty chapters but for this story I'm going to break that rule. I'll right another review when I catch up with the story.