overall below average novel. MC got lucky in character creation and is totally OP. there is no some great world background, nor any good character interaction. so far it is full of VR novel cliches and if you take any novel in that category there is more than 50% chance that it will be much better than this one. also contains racism, so i changed it from 2 stars to 1 star.
Please do not change the country, city and characters names, it only destroys the story!!! Many things that happens in China are simply impossible in the USA, so it makes to story looks like it was made by a idiot.
Only 2 chapters in and we find that Ice has betrayed Fire. Surprise!! This dumb dragon is so sore and resentful that he holds on through time and space to immediately bless his remaining power upon the loser MC who similarly has been abandoned by another chick.I already find that betrayal by a woman is the stupidest and most tired cliche of these novels. If a woman can motivate you that hard to be heaven-defying then maybe she should be the main character. But a story erected around 2 losers joining forces to prove their self-worth to a woman is just flaccid frottage.I'll put my 40 in but this is a lame - yes, limp - start.
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