Wings of Heart

This novel is not good. The translator is solid and released 80 chapters at once, but I don't have the willpower to finish them all at once. This is something you should read slowly otherwise you'll see too many of it's flaws and start puking.There are many reasons why it sucks, but I'll only go over a few (and it's one "saving grace" if you can call it that.First: The TransmigrationThis was done horribly, we don't know much about where he came from or who he was. He just mentions it a few times that he is a "transcender" with two souls so he is twice as powerful at the same level of another person. Aside from that though, what do we know? What the hell was the purpose of this??? 'Second: The MotherShe doesn't have much reason to exist other than giving our Main Character a reason to get stronger. We know basically nothing about her. She is a literal unfeeling uncaring plot point and it's scary.Third: The EcononomyIt makes no sense. I don't know what else to say. It makes literally 0 sense. I feel like, by the time I get to chapter 80, things are gonna cost well into the trillions for stuff like food. The price scaling is ridiculous and hurts my brain. In the same vein as that though, school is free... but apparently, you learn basically nothing and all that matters is catching them all- I mean being a beastmaster.Fourth: WorldbuildingThere is none. There is literally no worldbuilding aside from this: The world is called mercury and suddenly spacial holes opened up and out came monsters. There is some sort of alliance between nations that share a common currency. Also kids can enter a dangerous wormhole into a different world for some reason.Yeah it's pretty bad, but lets got onto the "saving grace" : The Main CharacterHe appears to be intentionally made flawed and seems like he's going to be given a character arc, in which he'll change and stop being such an ass towards the FL. He isn't great by any means, and the other characters are pretty bland hoping he dies for seemingly no reason but he is the best part of this. Oh and that includes the fights and everything so far. I'm being serious. My rating is only high because of the translator, read this if you like pokemon, super gene or monster paradise. If not then, don't

I don’t even know what’s going on, the writing is so bad. It at least has an Interesting premise though. The book has an obvious non native english speaking author. No world background (that I could tell) and if there was any character development in the dialogue then I couldn’t tell. I think the titan character race could do with being a bit more unique besides just “imagine a man... but big..” but that’s just a nitpick. If the author gets better at English or gets an editor that doesn’t mind all the work it would entail to edit this then this honestly would be a good story I think. We need more crafting stories overall.

Needs more details and more info about the settings, more details of people’s appearanceufffc

An idiotic story, idiot MC and no depth of character design its like an over simpathic japanese otaku got transmigrated in a chinese novel and then doing what **** they always do there is system tag but nothing of system in volume 2 in volume 1 MC just use system for acting cool no use of brain and a lot of moral bull****ing

I've read many story similar to this genre but this is what i want to my library because this is a very constructive and entertaining one. The humor and the scenes are what you expect to a realistic fiction.

Hi, I'm the author. I'm just gonna shamelessly rate this book above 5 stars. If you are looking for a cold MC that you can connect to, this is the book for you. Also, feel free to comment about your thoughts on each chapter.

"Really?" she said with a bit of sarcasm.

Mark shot up in his bed, right to his five-year-old feet. Bouncing, smiling with delight, jumping around - like a five year old - he then looked at his parents, sobering up. His parents, named James and Claire respectively, watched him with eyes flashing.