Why Did the Gentle Holy Father Turn Dark?

One day he didn't bring his tiffin and that day was our classes community lunch and we all girls take him to the class and I give my tiffin to him .

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

"Berita apaan?"

Laura's smile was strained, "Yeah, then you'll find another part of the house to tear apart."

What's wrong with this mc?? He acts like a beta, let's himself get slapped by a heroine for no reason and acts like a simp. Highly not recommended

Amazing, one of the best things I've ever read.........................................................................................................

Okay, to the point, first, your writing still needs improvement, many are too short, and moreover, emotional blur, but I noticed an interesting flow, just don't get good execution, for the next you can learn how to write better, such as making the narrative feel alive, etc.