Intriguing story so far(ch.28). I like the characters and the very evident setup for development. The interactions seem fairly natural. I am looking forward to how the power system will develop. Good luck author! Hope you can keep it up, I will be following.
Garbage waste of time Read the first 10 chapters and can’t stay interested in the storyHave no idea what the writer is trying to convey to the reader considering most readers don’t have a through knowledge of Chinese mythology Maybe the writer had an interesting idea and plot but unfortunately with weak start no one would stay and suffer to read it
Just wanted to say that I'll post a total of 10 episodes today so please give me suggestions on how to improve it! And pls rate my level if you think that it deserves some extra support!
Well at 1st the novel cover pic is captivating I give u that but the story is crap.... Just a copy of the IRAS... Well take my 1 star 🌟... BTW thanks for the story
This novel is inadequate. Besides the undefined system and the completely stupid actions of the MC, there is also the total lack of common sense everyone has.Example, finding a person by the vague description of his face, when the one describing is a normal human and it had been outside any civilization during the deepest of dark nights in the middle of nowhere. It is not like the human was running away from danger, no she must have had a torch to shine on the MC face to memorize it.She also went back home so the boss of her now dead pursuers could find her easily.Do not waste your time with this.
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Vine por tus otras obras y los tags, y me he quedado por la historia. Un comienzo "simple" que engaña, con mucha oscuridad y crueldad que llevan al MC al camino de un isekai? Pues no, resulta que es el camino más "normal" del bien y el mal. De momento enganchadisimo a la historia, aunque nunca soy muy fan de los MC consumidos por el odio/crueldad para lograr sus objetivos (y más si ello conlleva a alejarse de muchas ricas waifus). Esperando con ansias actualizaciones más constantes para no estar siempre a la espera.
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