What's the world hold for the modern man

<p>Gray was the one she always wished she was with. </p>

"I'm fine,"

I'll be very honest here. The concept in itself is good. The world building is good. The novel needs more updates and the rest will gradually become better.

This is such a cool story with an amazing concept that I've honestly never seen before. Kinda reminds me of JJK because of how only a select few can see the spirits. One issue I have is that in one paragraph, it sounds like Shakespeare wrote this and in the next, a random person. Dialogue is amazing, action is pretty good too but you don't need more than one exclamation mark or question mark to make the character seem like he's shouting. Good book tho