What Should I Do If I Time-Traveled Forty Years Later and My Lover Has Become an Old Man?

VIT: 7

The demon's already dying HP was finally snuffed out, the demon didn't stand up again. The greatsword character revived when the demon died, the four characters went near the demon and their weapons shone and absorbed the demon's corpse. The four consoles screen showed a big word; victory! The four of them quickly checked the items they got.

As soon as Tang Huai arrived home, she dragged her to the music room.

"Here it is, Subject 16" He picks up a small box from inside another larger box. He holds it up with his right hand then passes it to his left glancing at the dust on his right hand. He uses his sleeves to clean the box before examining it more closely.

John grabbed a knife and cut his way through the guards and cooks.

Lucas had been standing still, causing Silvana to repeat the question, "What are you doing? How can you help me?"

And we could all use a little change

"Bro, what are you doing ? I never took you for someone so gentle." Said Natsu as he sat besides Zeref and combined his Fire Dragon Slayer magic and his black magic, to create a black flame that danced in his palm.

Space was distorted as he appeared in front of me, once more, I ducked and slide under him then fired 9-burst to the joint of his armor.

Everything is just top-notch from writing quality to character descriptions to the feels and emotions. When reading a shifter story the audience needs to have this emotional connection which the story is providing in abundance. Also, I dislike abusive toxic MLs and Ranon is far from that, loving what a green flag he is. That's the truth definition of being strong, to take care of the weak and not abuse. This story has all the elements of becoming top-tier, keep writing dear author and good luck for the competition. I am rooting for you.

this book is really an interesting one for sure

This is so good. An Ning's story is a gripping tale of transformation and empowerment that showcases why I adore all the novels by this author. The protagonist’s journey from being overshadowed to embracing her true self is both inspiring and engaging. The vivid writing captures her emotions, especially during her dramatic confrontation with Feng Yue, showcasing her evolution. I need more!Themes of self-discovery and ambition resonate throughout the narrative, making it a compelling read. Overall, An Ning's story masterfully blends drama and depth, drawing readers into a world where rivalry fuels personal growth. It's a must-read for anyone who enjoys stories of resilience and transformation, and it perfectly reflects the brilliance of this author's work!