Weightless (H.S. BWWM)

I've only read a few chapters and I already feel emerged into the story. I really enjoy the character building and look forward to reading even more. The world building is very involving and beautiful which is hard to do, nice job!Keep up the beautiful work!

OMG ITS BACK! IT TOOK ME SOME TIME WITH THE NAME CHANGES, BUT THE FEEL OF THIS NOVEL WAS TOO FAMILIAR. I LOOKED AT THE AUTHOR NAME, JUMPED UP WITH EXCITEMENT, AND SCREAMED “YES”. I am so happy right now. LFG. I’ll take the changes in the character. I like this new version of my man. This is all I wanted.Buckle up fam. We are so back

Hello everyone, the name's Sky not hat anyone asked but with unnecessary introductions out of the way let's go to the review and rating based on the latest chapter(ch.13).1-Writing Quality: The story has a nice writing quality and I haven't seen any spelling mistakes or grammar errors, if there are I didn't see them because I was immersed in the story.[5 Stars Here]2-Story Development: The story has a nice feel to it, we get a minimal background of the MC's past life as to not take too much of the main focus that is his current life. The chapters are all connected and don't randomly seem like we missed a part of it, it's also very fluid and has a great word count for those who are interested in that.[5 Stars Here]3-Character Design: The characters so far have a decent personality and I think it's still soon to see if they have a lot of dept but so far the MC and all the people he interacted with have nice depth to them.[5 Stars Here]4-Updating Stability: The updates seem to follow a certain schedule and each release so far has had more than 2 chapters so it's a win in my book.[5 Stars Here]5-World Background: The world has a decent amount of details, enough to know places but not enough to feel immersed in the locations. What I mean is the setting of the scenes like describing certain locations, in this story we get descriptions like "small but clean apartment" but we don't get a "Uncle Charles office was as one would expect, it had a few pictures with current famous celebrities and some old ones, there where also some trophies and ...". This is what I mean, it doesn't paint a picture in the mind, I just think yeah he's in the office done. And since it may not be a recurring scene it might not matter much but at that moment it's important.[4 Stars Here]Overall:4.8Personal Opinion: I was recommended this book by @Extra26 and it was one of those recommendations that you don't regret so try reading at least 5 chapters before you say "D**n it has Harem tag, Ouch System cheat" and so on before giving it a try because the execution of the story seems worth it so far.

Shameless review here by this author... don't have much experience with writing so bear with me for  a while... however  I can promise you that this novel will get better. In summary the novel  is about Erindor Thorne , a young pathetic weak man who obtains an artifact that helps him to rise to the peak of his universe.....thanks for sticking around...!...

Good strong, has a slow first chapter but gets really interesting very quickly. Props to the author on this novel, it different in its own way.

I love the names, also the the worlds are remarkable.Overall this is a really nice bookHoping to see more like this and more from the author

He and I went up to London. He had the advice of an eminent oculist; and he eventually recovered the sight of that one eye. He cannot now see very distinctly: he cannot read or write much; but he can find his way without being led by the hand: the sky is no longer a blank to him- the earth no longer a void. When his first-born was put into his arms, he could see that the boy had inherited his own eyes, as they once were- large, brilliant, and black. On that occasion, he again, with a full heart, acknowledged that God had tempered judgment with mercy.

She just smiled and raised both of her hands.