Author Here!I`m just a beginner author so forgive me if there is noticeable grammar mistakes, I`m still working on it.Please provide me with constructive criticism.
Not that good. One of the worst ways I’v seen an author handle system/skills. MC is still a coward, timid, boy 130 chapters in. Things that should be considered skills in real life the author doesn’t consider them skills. MC still lives his life as if he doesn’t have a skill system. Has no proactivity in tryin to get more. All his skills have come unintentionally and every time he freezes in shock like he forgot he even had the system. On top of all that it’ a slow paced novel which makes the issues even more glaring. This was better off not being a system novel if this was the route he was gonna take with the MC.
reading chapter one, this got me hooked.. but the sypnosis stated many things, are there also others like him? travelers that knows the plot or reincarnated humans like him?
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