We Are a Newlywed Couple Who Entered the Academy

ooh nice premise. definitely added to my reading list

I believe this is correct and what you deserve.Please make sure to post more often so that you can get a higher rating and also so that more and more people will read and review your story

I would say top 10 for original novels. Sure sometimes the logic in the novel can be a bit unreal, like some guy who read one or two math books and basically created every invention that was made during the age of enlightenment(not mc by the way), but overall a good story with excellent developement.

The feeling that the story elicits is bleakness.  I think this was the intent, the characters that we meet at least in the first 70ish chapters don’t have any redeeming qualities.The setting is barely touched, a third of the chapters read and I can’t make myself care about anything.The tower trope isn’t great, and again 70ish chapters in, this ain’t good example of the trope.

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Writing Quality: 4/5Stability of Updates: 4/5Story Development: 3/5Character Design: 1/5World Background: 4/5This story is one of better written fanfics on this site and the system is easily understandable yet quite advanced compared to others while the storyline feels a little too much of a copy paste of original so far it's goodThe one and only problem for the story is a massive one, the mc is absolute trash, there's no redeeming qualities from him so far at ch34I really want to continue reading this but I can't, it's too frustrating seeing our mc having such a massive amount of resources available to him yet he acts like a fucking retard and fucks around and almost gets himself killed, let me guess, he'll look right into the basilisk eyes later just for the lols or something, that's how retarded he is, he threw a fucking rock cake on a troll and then proceeded to try to dodge the swings instead of you know actually using fucking magic

Name: Logan (David Smith)

After everything asimulated i had several voices in my head.