Hubert - The Goddess\'s Empathy And Wrath
In a world filled with sorceries, miracles, and knights, Young Hubert found himself immersed in struggle, trauma, and tragedy after joining the watchman. Deemed as a deserter turned slave, he tried to survive by learning from the greatest teachers, friends, and experiences.
Fighting corruption from internal conflicts of nobles and politics inside the kingdom of Creopia or the threatening dangers of the northern barbarians, indigenous tribes of the southern kingdom, pirates of the east, and the mysterious creatures of the western mountain range. Where even the helmsman of fate has corrupted. He soon realized his greater duty in the world was to protect it.
\"Wh-what? My element is... void?\"

Watchman To Chaos Hero
- Genre: Fantasy
- Author: Nekoman
- Translator:
- Status: Ongoing
- Rating(4.3 / 5.0) ★
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The strongest point is the MC itself, the turns of his life and it let you wondering about how he would cope and do in the future, to escape both from himself and his very own nature.
The author has a strong voice throughout the story, and the protagonist definitely comes across as having a troubled past. Plot-wise, starting in the middle allowed for opening up to some pretty intense action, and sets up a nice and deep exploration of the main character. I think there's great potential for a character-driven exploration of the themes and politics that put the protagonist in such a terrible situation.
On the technical side, there are mostly some issues with tense-case and a few misspellings, but nothing a good round of editing won't fix. Some of the dialogue can get a little confusing without indicators of who is speaking, and the extra space could be used to add little actions, facial expressions, etc.
Overall I would say that the character interactions are great, but the dialogue can be a little anime-esque in terms of sudden dramatic increase.
A solid start, and I'm sure once Nekoman finds his feet, it'll be off to the races.
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