Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
It's surprisingly not that bad. I just wanted to try something simulation type and at first, I thought MC was quite generic. You know, simp, low IQ, stubborn, lecherous, but I realised that I was too prejudiced. He reacted quite normally. I was just projecting my grievances with other novels on this MC. Like, he went back in time, but didn't know what to do with his money, so he chose to leave it in the bank for interest. Granted, it may not be the best use of money but it's definitely the safest. Also, he didn't let it get to his head and thought of setting limits on how to spend it so that he doesn't get carried away in the future. He is just a typical levelheaded ordinary guy. Also, he is pretty single minded and he was not extremely lecherous. He was quite pure. He didn't even kiss anyone properly in his two lives. I think some of the choices he makes due to impulsiveness gave me the wrong impression. Anyway, in these few chapters I have changed my opinion 180 degrees. 😂
I geniunely like it! It's really awesome! It gives out a vibe of interacting with the audience (like deadpool) but without the cursing words... Sometimes. The first few parts of the story is a blast! Although it may look slow, but it's still progress!
An excellent read this is great work, I love it keep working hard love your work. Keep it up Author and update more chapters soon, great job, I highly recommend your novel . 💯✔️
Petition to bring back World's Best Martial Artist and a couple of others..................................................................................................................Don't blame me for low rating, they will either not pick this novel at all or drop it midway anyway.
Hi author here.sorry for not uploading any chapter for a week.Sometimes we face a problem in our life.It can be very painful if you receive that pain from the person you love most.But i understand one thing that Don't believe money is everything. New chapter coming today.
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