Void Progenitor: My SSS Void Skill Transcends Reality

"This girl has made a huge mistake" I thought to myself, I needed to calm down. "Wait" I wispered "Is that Jenny. She had took it to far this time, my BFF had just gone in and stole my crush if she thought she could get away with that. Suddenly, I heard shouting "Get up Sofie, get up".

Current effects- cold (Higher chance of getting ill)

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

So far its been a nice read. MC isnt stupid and is doing things the smart way. I do wish he would utilize resources more like Alices dad could help make a guild etc I mean guess he is going more for personal power until he meets the people he was with in past life. I dont know how leveling in game relates to real level in life but if it does then he should be helping all those people who stuck by him to level up faster etc..The romance does need some work author since it feels too rushed and quick so maybe a little bit of work on that

all the female lead character does is blush at everything the main character saysi don't think there's any character development in this novel at allits mind numbing

I would say it’s pretty good and you should check it out :)

The writing is very interesting and makes me really look forward to the upcoming developments. The world-building is detailed, too. Keep it up! I hope you continue to improve and succeed!

The first chapter set up the tone pretty well, it was pretty serious and the mc isn't foiling around, he reminds me a bit of Gilgamesh from fate.The writing is also pretty neat and the use of fancier words have been used here and there, so far have potential and I cant wait to see more.