Well the premise is amazing and the story has a lot of potential unlike many other stories on this site the progression of the story is kinda slow but that's good in this caseby the way that part of the contract with the devil ends up going wrong later on and ends up becoming a very funny thing in chapter 128
Pretty good so far writing wise, I know this writer is working on multiple novels as well so keep up the good work with the both of them. Same last name as a certain someone as well, curious how it will tie later on..
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