I loved the concept of this novel and thought I would give it a try. Best decision I have made in a while. Great fun with lots of good story developments. I love nugget, I love his armor, and I generally love the idea of the character going through this world. The fight scenes are done well, not too much detail but not so little as to be confusing. The grammar and general English is at a high level which is refreshing. If I have any complaints it is that there isn't really enough meaningful character interaction. There are plenty of interactions between our MC and irrelevant characters but seemingly little in the way of discussions that matter or go anywhere. I would love to see a growing bond between him and nugget as well as enduring bonds with others (be they players or NPCs). That said it is very early and this sort of thing can definitely happen with time.
From where you leant to write this story. 😳😳😳. What a lovely story bro. I think one day you will be a writer. Haji this things ra very much realistic to some one's life bro. 🥺🥺👍🏻👍🏻
The novel lacked depth in character development and the plot felt predictable. It failed to engage me emotionally or intellectually, leaving me disappointed overall
"Not now, baby." As dissatisfying as that sounded, the younger didn't refuse what followed and allowed his body to be pressed against the glass door after he was picked up, his legs curling around a toned torso. He was already prepped since the previous night (the tattoo artist edged him for two hours straight before allowing him to cum) but he still moaned when two fingers entered him, making sure that he didn't need more. "Is my sweet boy ready or do you need Daddy to open you up?"
He stopped when Milly began laughing. Laughing at him. God, he was such a fool around her. Sometimes he wished he had Lelouch's smooth confidence. Though now that he knew it came from the fact that Lelouch was a royal prince, it wasn't as hard to explain.
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