where to start? xenophobic the author is on the extreme side of xenophobia againt other countries and cultures and against fantasy creatures and you can see that he gets a lot of xenophobic comments and he makes fun of the people saying it thinking he's not xenophobic.I've read so much and I wish I didn't the world of buildings such a good concept and that's all it will ever be the author butchered it he has no idea what makes a fantasy novel good he just spits on it constantly like all the fantasy has wronged him irl in horrible waysCHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. it's non existent. main character buildjng is only the first couple chapter then he's a cold xenophobic killing machine his main character is xenophobic how is there not more reviews of that? side characters. they have names besides that not much else most notable is long dragon his name has changed he had a good amount of character dev then it was dropped. his girl friends are many and no sustenance one was mentioned who author was playing as having a big role on mc and I can not rember anything about her at all nothing. the sister can be considered not to be in the story she plays no part except saying the wrath mc would have if anything happened to her.just don't read it it's not worth money and especially not your time I really wish it was better I had such high hopes and just constant let downs sorry for any grammar mistakes
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Can the protagonist be like very feminine or very beautiful face...and have a female slender body structure but without the female genitalia parts...I’m weird pls kill me...I lie yaoi too btw...
What makes this a huge red flag to me, is that within the first few chapters, not once is a "Sword" mentioned, or his ability with it. The only thing the story eludes to is his unmatched potential at "cultivating" and the new super awesome cool technique for it that he recieves.. Makes me think this story will be more about his "power" and not his "skill" which either have already been done, cliched and shoved down our throats countless times, but when it comes to those types of stories which I will only read out of sheer boredom and nothing else to do..at least the ones based around "skill" are more thought out. MC advancing down the dao of the sword etc..or understanding laws behind it. Not some lame cultivation technique.
Excellent book I have to say, story development is on point, keeping the tension and suspense growing. Character Design is relatable, easy to flow with and the world Background give you the enthusiasm of a kind of realm you want to learn about. Good job, author!
"Quit your pissing and moaning! Its for the doctors to decide if you're fit to work or not. If it was up to me you'd be out there serving Okran the only way you heretics know how to. Observed physical labor. Now quit stalling and get your ass out here!"
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