V - The Vampire Lore

Legend of the Supreme Soldier is honestly an amazing book and one of my favorite books tho read, as I have a hard time switching to another book and/or moving on to writing my fanfic that’s currently in production (not a shameless plug, I’m just saying that I have a hard time closing the book and moving on to other things that I need to do, like writing the fanfic.). To keep this short, I’ll just say that it’s an amazing book that was translated well and has an amazing story. Overall, I sincerely recommend this book and can not wait to finish it.

so can                                                                                                                                         anyone                                                                                                                                     leave                                                                                                                                                        a comment and i know its spelled wrong and tell me a good story to read

Its a very powerful story laden with so much excitement.  I like the strong sense of attraction per character and their enigmatic individual roles. Haven't finished yet reading but it sounds more interesting to peep for the next virtual ply and more. You may give it a try too :)

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It was a nice read. The plot is very interesting. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer and sentences though. It can make readers want to leave the story.

Take my words as a passing wind for I have only skimmed through your work.Separate your paragraphs such that they contain 2 to 4 sentences depending on length, otherwise it would be too taxing to read.Apologies for not reading the entire story.Write well and don't hesitate to ask for help from other authors in the official discord server of inkstone. You can be a better writer.

Its a good novel thats flowing & has an interesting cast... Its rare to see the cast of a harem who are unique & have things they want to do instead of always being the YESMAN to their counterpart... The only part that makes it lose a point in story development is because it doesn't make sense since he wants revenge against the hunter for using them as bait... Why hasn't he hired a lawyer or something to sue his mother for their inheritance since he has the money & back-up to do that now... That makes it flawed since if you want revenge you always start at the bottom... Hope we see a resolution of that part... I hope its not one of those forgiveness arcs since it looks like the mother never cared for them...

Very good novel I enjoyed  every  second reading  it