I’ll give myself an honest review. I know u have a lot of work to do before this becomes popular (if it ever does)Thank you all for reading and I hope to see your honest reviews here for feedback.
is the mc able to take damage or not, you say in the same sentence multiple times he didn't take any damage yet is somehow fatally wounded? this story makes no sense, and transitions between paragraphs are like getting gut-punched in the brain. Various grammer and spelling errors throughout makes it even worse. If I could give the world building a zero I would, nothing is explained.
I’m already deprived of this and keep checking on if it started being written again. 😭 Author, take your time, but can you tell us the estimated time it’ll take for you to continue producing chapters? It’s making me die with anticipation
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This is actually good. Also don’t listen to those idiots who say that he could’v left the palace as the reason for him not being able to leave is eventually revealed in ch39. definitely better then the other trial reads.
Lu Yan keep walking back and forth behind her, never found the right words to say. Thinking what to say and what her replies might be. Different scenes just replaying in his head, but in the end, he didn't say anything.
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