Unworthy

The book is good, I like how the Introduction chapter was written. Oh! And the characters' name, usually it attracts me, I like how unique the names are. I only see a few doctor theme/genre stories so this is quite refreshing. ( Made me remember of the Kdrama The Doctors and the Hospital playlist)

So hard to find a good detective series that's not featuring a know it all **** or kid...Finally, an ***** detective who has grown people issues, thoughts or actions! The story is refreshing. The MC doesn't have all the answers, he wasn't so predictable or flawless. He tries to learn from his mistakes & reflects on his decisions. He solves things one step at a time while the readers follow along with him. The system doesn't give more than the story needs. I like how he has to figure out the system clues. Chapter Updates are frequent enough & the translation also flows well & is easy to read.  It's surprising this isn't featured more or chapters aren't sealed by power stones it deserves to be monetized but I glad It's not yet, Another wise I would not have been able to binge read such a great & entertaining novel. Miao Ying & mc epic trolls & battles made me instantly laugh many times. The cases are both brilliant & real horrible as hell!  Many twist & turns! Just when you think everything is solved or you know what will happen next, the plot turns on its head! Just when think you understand a character you find your self fooled! I have to try not to get emotionally invested in these developed, deep & likable characters after that one death case...Cause any moment a swerve may happen that hits right in the feels. Thanks for this story I am enjoying it! This has earned my power stones!Lord knows we all want more Dui/Kan days!  I wish the author & translators many Dui/Kan days! VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!VOTE UP!!!

i really like this story. the concept is so funny how they interact with each other .good good good goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgood

Could someone explain to me the time scale when they mention “x” number of moons or suns. I don’t think i missed where it was explained like how the units of measurement was but it makes it very difficult for to picture whats going on without a proper timetable

I'd grade the writing quality anywhere from B+ to A- approximately. No major grammatical errors, and the author's more than satisfactory command of English already places him miles ahead of at least half the other writers over here on WN. As for the story itself, reading this takes me back to the .hack franchise I used to love playing through (and watching) in my teens.Lastly, with regard to points for improvement? There's really not much I have on that end, considering what's already been written is already very good. The one bit of general advice I'd say applies here is to go back to your material and proofread it at least once or twice a month for any grammatical errors you may have missed at an earlier point.Well done overall.

Even better than Pocket Hunting Dimension!!! A thousand times better!!!The author has really outdone himself this time. He really did a wonderful job in balancing out the MC's character.This novel is unlike his previous novel where the Main character's actions felt as if they were forced and his pushy character that always acted submissive when talking to his sister or any other female character. The MC's character in this novel is clearly defined, he acts logically, emotionally, with a hint of humour and still retains his whole character. The world-building is also marvelously done. I have not noticed any plot holes as of yet, and I hope there won't be any in the future.As of now I truly hope that this novel gets picked, it truly deserves at least that!!!!

Mc with no brain cell, system slave, and yuri 😮u200d💨

The idea of the world is overrun by Monsters is not unique but here we have an nice but poor MC with the talent that he can extract the talents that his avatar gained in an game similar to the existing monster dungeons. The story description is here misleading as I thougt that the MC has to kill humans and then extract the talents from their corpse. If the MC keep his attitude and the world backround doesn´t change dramatically like in other story this should be a story worth to read.