The story is quite good. The grammar of course could be better,but still,it's ok. Though,I would have preferred you you used real players, and not made up ones. Overall,it's nice.
Well at the beginning, it is just what you would expect from the cover... honestly I did not even think that this novel will cross 30 chapters..Ah I am so glad that I was mistaken...Well the r-18 part still remains, but the story has a very nicely unfolding plot. Even if some characters (especially those at the beginning of the book) do not have any dimension other than having sex, that surely has changed quite a lot... at least the author puts in more effort to flesh out the girls (especially from the book) than before. To anyone starting new: Bear with it... this novel will slowly turn better. Trust me when I say that there was a time when I would just let it lie in the library and read it only when I wanted to fap to a novel... well, today I have paused reading a few other novels in order to use my free pass here...
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This type story is not worth reading because the mc is weak will and I hate those with that character the most because those characters fear the strong and bully the weak and they tend to betray their friends when put under pressure
Exhilarating work this is, yes. I don't wanna sound too dramatic but this is the story which adds thrill to my boring life as a reader. I loved this work. thanks author of this work.
This is amazing, I’m absolutely loving this and it’s quickly become one of my favorites. I have zero complaints except for grammar and I don’t even really care about that. Can’t wait to see where the story goes, excited for the next chapter!
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