unnoticed feelings

A face slapping novel... i know many of you would have already read this type of novel and so did I but still I am enjoying this and you all should also give it a try.story is well written so go for it.

Do you plan on making this book available anywhere else other than Webnovel.  Is so, were?  Also this is a great book.

I feel uncomfortable reading this novel, I understand that the MC has some problems to empathize or maintain stable relationships, almost as if he did not have common sense (it is my understanding of the MC so far), but it is repetitive and boring, it has a kind of system +1 point of interest, but it is suffocated by the normal world and its mundane problems, I do not feel special emotion towards the novel, the MC is oblivious to the reader, only his superficial thoughts are mentioned and we do not know why the MC reacts or acts differently forms in various occasions, sometimes he is proactive in helping (example: when he helped his internship partner) and sometimes he is passive (his partners leave him after losing interest or the MC acts "weird") there are not many examples because information is lacking about the MC and his life. Summary, the novel has nothing flashy or anything that calls my interest, I can only qualify it as a casual reading. (He has a system we expect some action, hot blood or a new world, it is boring to read about a man who acts "normal" despite having a system, I say the norm of the system is to have adventures or do something interesting) (Google translator)

I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. I hope you stick through the first 5 chapters at least before deciding if you like my book or not. I strive to improve my writing every chapter and I would love honest feedback.

Great story and nice character build. The background description is also amazing and interesting. This story has great potential. Keep it up, author!

5 Stars!!! It's basically Overlord but with a WW2 theme. There are some sections that are in spanish and have a lot of text gibberish. But a part from that it's a ok story!

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Here is 5* cause ggmissfortune is a ***** 4 1* ....thats just sad 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140