Unlimited Revamp for the Pawn

from my point if view, this is the best book I'd come across...  and that's why I give a 5 star ... because no one that comes across this book will ever regret ir

it was good and all but every time i read a novel with kingdom building with overpowered mc there will always be a flaw in fc which i have dissatisfaction with like in some mc is stupid in some mc just sits back ..well in this it is readable but this is not the story for the audiences to read it plainly author fantasy what he will do when he gets that power and mc in racist , i know it creates a psychological problem when you literally dies for 1000 of times with pain , shock but the mc is inherently not a good person he did all that for humanity but is actually for himself and slowly all of his(author) drak fantasy persent itself and i know it is necessary to kill but he just become a sadistic person he just love to see people despairing face like he is just a evil(villian) guys with extremely op power with no one against him...so yeah it is just which fulfillment.

The story seems nice with a uncommon system that I personally have not seen before. But unfortunately its a real pain to read due to bad editing and some grammar mistakes, Hopefully Author-san can get an editor to make it more smooth to read, until then thats the best I can say...

A powerful Novel. The author was has been known for several decades of uninteresting novels with mediocre plot and messages has finally stepped up to the standart we've had from his earlier years. A completely original plot and tropes, filled with powerful messages about today's society. This novel tackles every modern day problem while being a eastern fantasy novel. The exquisite writing of the author that reminds us of his first best-seller " Reincarnated in Highschool DxD with a cultivation CEO system as a Harem God with my pokemons " that, although a gritty and sensational fan fiction, didn't make it to the oscars, is only surpassed by the powerful messages that each pages deliver. From Capitalism to oversexualization, every problem is denounced and analized in this novel, even the feminazi will like it. The main character, whom I shall not name for spoiler reason, is the symbolism of hope for better days in a dystopian monarchy controled by the evil 'cultivators'.This novel will make you laugh, will make you cry, but you will alaways, at each chapter, become more, grow as the main character goes through tribulations, and encounter characters as well written as himself. The story of the world depicted is fleshed out perfectly, you will feel immersed in a torrent of emotions and information in this novel. Overall, this novel is a phenomenon that will transcend even Webnovel and may very well become the next beacon of modern literature.

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Very good plot line, comparable to Supernatural and Grimm, but with Isekai (transfer to other world with memories) twist.It is still building up the story line, which is very interesting so far, hopefully it stays amusing.

Please kindly help create more chapter on this stories I really appreciate the time you spent on bringing it up please I just can't wait to get more details on the story

The feeling that the story elicits is bleakness.  I think this was the intent, the characters that we meet at least in the first 70ish chapters don’t have any redeeming qualities.The setting is barely touched, a third of the chapters read and I can’t make myself care about anything.The tower trope isn’t great, and again 70ish chapters in, this ain’t good example of the trope.