Unintended Deception

  • Genre: Urban
  • Author: Chai_Writes
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.4 / 5.0, 16 votes)
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  1. Esenel
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    It’s actually pretty good considering the mc is self learning... 5 out of 5 it’s not to slow or to fast.. barely any grammar mistake.. and the update is ok..  so a very good read.
  1. Jimmy_Kibble
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    not to take a jab at the author or anything but whenever i see a novel with 100k+ views but only 14 reviews will all of them being 5star reviews i couldn't help but feel that negative reviews have been deleted, have happened to me before, some people just cant take criticism. they don't understand that veteran readers will identify this anomaly instantly and most of the time skip the novel. anyway although apprehensive i will still give it a try.
  1. BloodicysXdw
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    Read about 40 chapters and had to stop reading (for now) . Very interesting world and the story seems to also become more interesting . So why did I stop? Well unless you like to read how pretty much every side characters (I guess at least once every chapter) are stunned and/or amazed by how the MC is a guy instead of a girl, how he has such soft skin, and how it makes women envious and men jealous, then this will get on your nerves.The characters designs are often also a bit boring. Instead of describing a character based on unique features (like a crooked nose), you get to hear why someone is beautiful or average. In other words telling instead of showing.It is also hard to gauge the intelligence of this MC. Sometimes he sounds smart, like using a rock throwing game in his favour. Other times he sounds like a idiot, like when he dismisses a skill allowing him to shoot through walls without considering any other uses for it like being able to penetrate armor or shields.If you can read past those kind of descriptions every chapter then I would definitely recommend this. The game is fun, the world is great, and the class is one I don’t think is used often. Props to the author for writing an interesting novel, I just need a break from all the trap and beauty descriptions.
  1. Cwunchytaco
    Cwunchytaco rated it
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    boring, start race chosen is so generic, said he was going to choose fighter but went mage. to much info dump right at the start. here i was hoping for a decent vrmmorpg novel to read but ended with with this garbage.
  1. BrinBruSdG
    BrinBruSdG rated it
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    Aw, I'm really looking forward to this story! A female MC's revenge plot. I wonder if her ex-husband will be the male lead or not. Hope to be able to read this soon :)
  1. FavouriteReaderCka
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    Boom! Boom! Boom! Bang!
  1. Ur_adoptedbtw96
    Ur_adoptedbtw96 rated it
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    Her beautiful eyes already brimming with tears, her boobs giggling while running.
  1. Lapllace
    Lapllace rated it
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    "Go away," he says gruffly.
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