This is a work of fiction. Any names, characters, stories or events, are fictitious!
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At the most unfortunate day which also the luckiest day for Xing Heero, his village was attacked by a specter. He lost family, his childhood sweetheart, he lost everything. However, on the same day, the strongest man called Saint picked him up as his disciple.
After years of training under the strongest man, Saint. To fulfill his Grandfather\'s dream to be a Great Hero, Heero started his career as a Hero. Heero was determined to kill specter and would not let any child experienced the same experience as him.
However, maybe he had used all his luck to get the strongest man as his Master. Somehow, all of his achievement was stolen by the other heroes. The unfortunate event kept happening to Heero which led all of his achievement being robbed by the other Heroes.
In the last of his unfortunate event, he tried to kill God Specter, but it only ended him up sealed in Eternal Ice. The last moment before Heero lost consciousness, he vowed he would retire as Hero.
\"Father! Mother! I will be obedient! I will stop to be Hero and continue our family line, please release me from this Eternal Ice!\"

Unfortunate Hero's Retirement Life
- Genre: Fantasy
- Author: HotIce
- Translator:
- Status: Ongoing
- Rating(3.8 / 5.0) ★
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I tried to read it, but my head srarted hurting while reading the first two chapter.
I read novels for entertainment and to build a world in my mind while reading these stories. if i want to immerse myself into the story, it needs to have a basic level of grammar and story telling quality.
I also read comments about this grammar problem and that it gets better with the chapter as the story develops.
But i needed to stop reading, because my head could not take it.
If possible could you please rewrite the beginning, so that it reflects the real quality of the world you build.
I would really appreciate it and hope your stories get traction and your writing improves by leaps and bounds
Writing quality is average with a bit of grammatical errors in the beginning, characters are good and so is the world background.
Yours Sincerely
This is simply atrocious.
Our Mc is sealed for an unknown time, but when he woke up and broke the seal, he realized he was in a foreign land. Later, slowly but surely, our Mc will find out how he end up in this foreign land (Earth). He will slowly uncover the mysteries Earth experienced such as the catastrophe 600 years ago and so on. Please be patient with the slow start :)
I hope you enjoy my second work or maybe third? Nevermind, hope you enjoy my story :)
It's really hard to follow with all the grammar errors. This is like using machine translation
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