Pretty good pacing, with the story not feeling rushed, and overall really good writing quality.The Pacing is a bit on the slower side so we don't get to see that many sides of the protagonist as of chapter 6 but he seems pretty chill and level headed. His name keep making me think he would turn out to be a vampire thought.keep up the great work!
"Naruto, you're still young," said Kurama after a moment's silence. "You'll overtake them soon enough. Don't let your frustration rule over you. Meditate. Gain control over your emotions. You'll never know the wonders it will do you."
Diane looked to the side and clicked her tongue, the rest of Mizanco respectfully nodded their heads and smiled. Tania sat back down with a satisfied grin. Sia stood up next to introduce herself.
She went out and left me untold. I asked myself " Who really is her?" I'm getting confused about everything. I went out and I look for her.. but she's nowhere to be found outside. I went to the comfort room and washed my face. Am I dreaming? My gosh.. If I am, please wake me up.
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