Under One Rule

you mind numbing fool, first you gave him the rock from his master which sent him to peak ascendant pure vigor then you literally had him refine the petal just before this as you stated his abilities had increased immensely, so what in bullshit do you mean he can't match ascendant pure vigor

Kitabı soluksuz bitirdim. Öncelikle mutlaka devamını bekliyorum. Hikaye bence süper.  Akıcı  bir dille yazılmış. Maceranın içinde buluyorsunuz kendinizi. Şiddetle tavsiye ederim.

Good premise but bad execution.... Racism shtz starts after trial read and so I already invested myself into it before the novel shows it's real colors... Also the story got is fast but the mc is slow as snail...

this is a great novel. just a shame it never got picked up it has spectacular world building and character's design it's just a shame all these great novels are fading  in to the background while other novels that are uninterested or start of great later because trash keep on going while this one never got a chance

So ive only read until ch 40, so take that as you may.So i imagine everyone has already read about how its a DnD type book, does it break immersion, not really... So its alright. I feel it only breaks immersion if u didnt get pased the first ch, cause after then u realize its a simple dynamic between the charcater, the ai, the world, and the story telling.The story is very complex, with a clearly developed lore that i dont know cause idk Cthulu lore ... I dont hate it for that though.Also it isnt a simple game thing, (spoiler alert) the monsters are real, like the game is prob in an alternate dimension or something.And it seems the real world is cool too, but i havent gotten any explanation at all!!!!And the mc seems connected to a family related to these monsters, not alot of bg on that yet. So the Ai or whatever is a ***** like all the time,k so thats super annoying.And the text b/c of the lore and the dnd type jargon is make its hard to read, especially in the beginning. But it isnt that important. Just know that his firsy mission spawned in real life cause he failed in it.Pron for me is that the game is too luck based, annoyingly so, and it penalizes u for using an outside skill, like the mc for knowing latin and knowing the lore. It basicallt doesnt really allow u to prepare outaide of the game.But yeah the game seems to have different modes thay j dont understand yet( and if there arent other modes, it just proves my point in how confusing it is)And it seems this game came about mysteriously, like it poped outnof nowhere, and unrealistically became known by alot of people but not necessarily have a huge following base, idk it isnt explained wel. Cause it seems like its a new game, but soooo many people seems to have played it for a while ? Plot hole, bad story writting, or my misunderstanding ... Idk.TldrIts really not bad, might be a great story, crazy lore, the world seems very cool as well, its still very hard to read bc of the game lore, game jargon, and world jargon that isnt explained at all, and the game seems booty luck demanding, hard to understand at first, and the ai is an annoying ass.

I'm only a little over 10 chapters, but it's looking really good so far. The writing is really well done with very little to no errors that I can recall. The story is still pretty new, so the story development and the world building are still a work in progress and are being fleshed out. I'm interested to see how it'll go later down the line. The main character seems pretty stable and not some emo edge lord or a horn dog that's into creating a catch em all type harem, so that's a plus for me lol. And the update speed seems to be an every other day kinda thing, which is really nice. But like I said, it's still fairly new, so I'll see about an update to this after about 50 or so chapters when the story starts to really get going.

''WHAT ?! is there is something weird with my eyes ??'' Mary asked

"Ahhhhh, damn it, my back..."