Uncover Me | TAY #3 | PREMIERA 08.10

Krillin and Gohan then came near the bushes and were shocked to see a Namekish child, he had some bruises and a crying expression.

I decided to ignore  everything and I laid on my bed Then I closed my eyes Ignoring Everything In the world ,

I looked at the messily cut bread, the overflow that signaled there was too much sauce and butter and the fact that the meat in between the bread looked like it had been chewed prior to being put on the sandwich. All of which would usually make me not want to eat such an imperfect sandwich, yet....when I looked at the sandwich I felt a burst of warmth in my heart before looking over at the blushing and nervous Irina.

Having been so accustomed to his absence, I found it incredible that he had beensitting beside me all this time, present. He had not made a sound.

I really liked how the story developed, I personally like this type of novels and it is well structured.

A fantastic start! I'll definitely be reading this daily. This story hooked me instantly, and I just can't stop. Great job, author! 10/10 from me!

The novel depicts African scene, very articulate and interesting, a prolific writer you are. Keep it up and more updates, author. You can actually sell this as a movie, you know but in an African scene and costumes.

I really like this novel (genuinely) but chapters needs to be increased (how can I just be satisfied with 4 chapters 😭).please do the mass uploading

I think this is a good book, I like the blood knights shit and Rena op level up ability or whatever I think it’s pretty cool, you don’t get one scene with Lilith until like ch 18 and it’s not even the real her, it’s her in a trial, like brother it’s the whole premise.Also i have a strong inkling this is at least AI edited because, it’s not that certain phrases come up a lot, but when introspective dialogue about how a nighamisnt afraid anymore or is ready for what’s next. It’s just a bit annoying and the book would’ve got a 4 star if not for the sprinkling of slightly annoying corny monologue and dialogue when it  doesn’t need to be emotional. I know how it is, I’ve written thousands f words worth of fiction using ai, I can tell after like 4 chapters if something is ai written unless heavely edited by a human after. Other than that great story.