Unbreakable Ties

Mattheo entered his crude home and began to studiy the language using the man's memories to support his learning. Entirely unlike his own language, weeks had passed before he could consider himself capable of speaking the most basic and elementary sentences. Each word spoken was like nails on a chalkboard due to its unfamiliarity. That, and well the fact that he hadn't spoken much lately. Mental commands were how he usually spoke to those he could interact with, and needless to say he was well out of practice.

He sat in a shaded place where nobody would bother him in sorrow.

Because of the sudden stop and peculiar sounds are heard from the distance, all 6 of them got out under the desks, they stood up with confused faces are written over their faces, they saw the windows from the side where the door is, the windows are illuminating bright light that can blind them, when it should really be dark because the lights from the corridor are dim. "We'll talk about this later!" Ronald pointed over Quela and Mina, because of the fact that their is a Bright laight, chirping, and water fall sounds, The male teacher then walked over the door to open it, but the Stella stopped him, "Don't! it might be dangerous!" Ronald stopped and looked over Stella, he then looked back and started walking over the door, Stella grabbed his arm trying to stop him, "you should atleast check the windows!" Ronald then said "We can't, the windows are frosted, and also it can't be opened." Ronald then opened the door.

"Do I really seem to you like a good fairy? Do I seem to be a fairy at all?!"

"Eh ...." Writerz looks confuse as i expected.

The two gods live in different places, Light lives in Mega-Supernova and Dark lives in the Black Hole. They like to make their creatures on earths.

don't know much about the story and can't predict what will happen next.writing is good but chapters are top short.

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Based on the three chapters I've translated, I can provide some insights into the novel's qualities: 1. World-building: The author has created a rich and complex world with its own cultivation system, societal structures, and magical elements. The Great Celestial World, with its Nine Provinces and various sects and families, seems well-developed and intriguing.2. Character development: The main character, He Heng, is introduced as a reincarnated individual with memories from a previous life. This adds depth to his character and provides an interesting perspective on the new world he inhabits.3. Plot: The story quickly introduces conflict and mystery. The murder of a prominent figure, the pursuit of a hidden treasure, and He Heng's kidnapping all serve to create tension and drive the narrative forward.4. Cultivation system: The novel presents a detailed cultivation system with various realms and techniques, which is typical of the xianxia genre but seems to have some unique elements.5. Writing style: The author balances action, dialogue, and internal monologue effectively. The pacing is good, with a mix of intense scenes and moments of exposition.6. Themes: The novel touches on themes of power, longevity, and the consequences of one's actions, which are common in the genre but handled well here.7. Originality: While it incorporates many tropes common to xianxia novels, the He family's unique cultivation technique that trades combat power for longevity is an interesting twist.

The main character is the definition of a sociopath, so many dead innocent/ disposable people. But looks like Lane is developing a soul, kinda.