just...what have i read? bruh i need to wash my eyes now. i am a reader and got goosbumbs from the amount of cringe here and i don't want to imaginethe feeling of writing it...overall a mess grammar and writing style with a disgusting mc and lot of emojis while mc crying aloud how he is sad because his wife slept with another bla bla bla...author you can start by reading other novels first see how things work try to understand or even copy their style if you can, stop using imoji on novel because it just disturb the pace and no one likes them. good luck for your next.
I have lots of problem with your story your story also has not potential but you are not using it properly I mean you could have done your execution in a better way like fated self does not interfere it just please at it is what I mean is you could have made your story longer by using your imagination and information with some kind of science in mixed like that he should be restricted so you can game control over that because of that you can create your own story in better way like he has to find who is for what reason dear could be many options you can but you did not take anything you just got there, and today easy route out
It's an interesting read. Sort of like a Korean drama😂I'm curious to find out how the plot turns out. I'm guessing Ha-na and Ji-hoon have a history that'll affect the series alot.Keep writing, Author.
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