"Bessssh! Sige na pinapaalis na kami ng magaling mong jowa!" Nagyakapan pa kami ulit at umalis na sila at pumunta sa kanilang mga mesa. Niyakap ko siya.
"Emotion." He trailed off and clawed the ground, furious. Ivypool understood, he is a powerful cat, he shouldn't admit defeat, just this simple confession felt worse than losing a battle. She rested her tail on his flank, pressing against him trying to be comforting, but it made Ivypool's pelt heat up in embarrassment, she tried scooting away, but Hawkfrost's tail held her close, Ivypool opened her jaws, but nothing came out. The fuzzy feeling in her stomach drowned Ivypool. Hawkfrost smirked and drew her in closer.
The story is good but the author writes very slowly. It should not be that difficult to write the events that will happen.At least the connected chapter should release together.
A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work—though there is still room for improvement
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