Custom Made Demon King is a garbage novel. MC died saving the innocent. The first thing he does when he reincarnates is to kill an innocent woman in the Van Helsing world. Legit the author does not know how to write a character. He should have died killing innocent people instead, as that would make much more sense.
To me this novel isn't even a sequel to the previous one, you can tell that is written by a different author. It should be treated as a fanmade rather than an original sequel.
Good novel at the start ruined by the Author. Spoilers aheadNow this is gonna be pretty long so stop after this first paragraph if you can't be bothered. Well this novel has only one good point in my opinion and that was the beginning more specifically the word building after that everything was trash. Mc got dumber by the chapter the author did much more dumb **** that made this so much harder to read and his/her lack of good grammar didn't help either now I am no expert but at least I have basic grammar I think.Apart from that this is more to do with the Mc the first few hunting trips he only went out with 2 out of the 5 skills and his friends die oh buhoo he spent 5 days he could have used to get stronger and for revenge crying like a dumb a** now this isn't that bad some people are more emotional than others but come on man his "trauma" is so bad that he kills level 2 bunnies till he's level 12 and it worked out for him really because he got a title which upped his stats and level apart from that he gets the ai helper or what ever and instead of levelling it up bit by bit he decides to wait till he can mass level it. Oh and the funniest thing about that is although the Ai got more info or was allowed to share more info it got a personality while that isn't too bad at the chaos dragon cave it actually impeded him because it was annoyed at him and didn't want to tell him somethings now if it was a dire situation he would have been royally f*cked.Now also this guy has a hidden stat that has a recharge time which is so long it's stupid and he forgets to deactivate and or activate it and the Ai tell him it knows how to make him stronger well I don't know about you but if I had such a stat I would wish for some op monsters to fight be weakened and than be so weak that I can kill them for mass levelling but lucky him it seems the Ai had another way because plot demanded it and it was to get a super special bloodline now man why would you add bloodlines in this like seriously it may just be my preference but when it is battle of ascension and probably humanity has to "ascend" shouldn't they mostly being doing it by them selves and not with help from the other species I mean the vibe I was getting off it was at a point they would have to fight the other races like demons devils etc and if it goes this route if they fight dragons then it doesn't even make sense anymore in my opinion but this bit really is like Is aid my opinion.A part from this guy mistakes this op bloodline for some semi decent potion leave luck on meets love interest that is unlikeable and irritating and the situation end up in one of the only ways that a girl could possibly get close enough to him a see that shrivel of a thing that was good about him with out immediately running a way and trying to forget about him. Also one of the most infuriating things is this guy sells a legendary saber just because he can't use it none of his family can and he wants to open his mothers restaurant. Now I don't know about you but when you're looking for allies or think you are gonna look for allies (this refers to his future plan) you should find a strong saber user and give he/she the saber GOD F*CKING D*AMN IT!Terrible novel good world building at the start ruined by the AUTHOR not the Mc because he created this **** fest.
Hey... Like your story... it's a good read... Just think you need to add more details about the world. I start to crave it by the third chapter, and without it I don't really understand the explanations about the 'old monkey'.Even a few sentences in the second chapter about 'this world... is this...'a lot less direct then what I just wrote, but keep going!without the world the details don't mean as much... if I knew where the 'old monkey' was from, even a few words after the word monkey, I would understand where they met, and know more about the story...
The Snake Sannin flickered twice more, each time receiving the same instant assaults upon his arrival, before he cleared the area around him with a mass, wide area technique and called Manda, the boss of the snake summons.
The projectile immediately exploded with the container, releasing a large amount of blackish liquid on the Shadow. Harel quickly understood what it was. He placed both palms on the ground to lift his body. During his movement, his right foot went up to the creature's chin, and to its great surprise, he touched it. The blow slightly raised the surprised monster, having just understood what had happened. The hunter then closed his left fist and sent it to the Shadow's face. However, the latter blocked his offensive with another punch, finally engaging in a real hand-to-hand fight. Harel smiled, lowering his sickle on his target's head. The Shadow's hand immediately changed shape, taking that of a dagger. It pushed its new weapon up the trajectory of the sickle, deflecting it. The monster then shifted his body to his left, quickly dodging an arrow that had just been fired by Siena. Harel, coordinating his movements with his teammate, reached the side of his target after it dodged, trying to cut it on the chest. The creature deviated the blow again with its dagger-shaped hand. It then pulled up its right leg, whose size increased drastically, hitting Harel violently with it. The fighter crossed two trees because of the strength of the blow. The impact caused him to spit a stream of blood while plunging him into unconsciousness.
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