Trapped in my Brother’s BL Fantasy

I thought it was great. Actually, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! It's just the beginning, I know, but the author does an excellent job with visualization. Plus, the story itself is intriguing. Please, Author,  give us longer chapters. That's all I ask.

good start and hopefully there will always be more interesting updates

Dark sighed and then shouted, "LET WE CREATE!"

❝Gentler words should have been used to give voice to reality's sting,❞ Fausta remarked with her head bowed, hoping thought won't deliver daggers to chest. At her 20th year, she has already seen a number of fellow slaves reduced to nothing but a specter of their former self, suffering forever tattooed on the entirety of their flesh.

"Food sounds good, also good job, not many can beat me in a one on one." give props when they are due, and here they are due.

"Ohhh that. Well that was the Susanoo. The third power of the Mangekyou Sharingan that I told you about. You have seen me use the Amaterasu against that True Dragon and the Tsukuyomi against that Lu Zhannan guy during the banquet. The Susanoo is the third power of the Mangekyou Sharingan. What you saw was the first of five stages of the Susanoo. The first stage is where the rib cage and its arms are formed. The second stage forms a complete upper body skeleton that is 20 m tall. The third stage forms muscle and skin tissue over the skeleton and gives it armor and weapons, at this stage the Susanoo become 40 m tall. The fourth stage is were the lower body of the Susanoo is formed making the Susanoo 100 m tall. As for the fifth stage, you'll have to wait for it. And every time I use the Susanoo I get more proficient at using it allowing me manifest the higher stages of the Susanoo until I've reached the fifth stage." said Mesa to Jasmine who was getting more shocked by the minute.

Officer Name : Aleksander Zaitsev

Kuroka's matter came first, followed by Serafall's.