Transmigrated into Everia: A Realm of Chaos

This could be a really good story.  I do love the concept, but the execution has not been that great.  Granted, I am only about 30+ chapters into the story, but this is enough to give me pause about a number of issues.  1) Next to no character development from anyone.  Even the MC at the very beginning didn't really have much emotion one way or the other when finding out he died and has been reborn with a system.  2) The MC is all about getting along with others when it is little girls, but is kill them all when it comes to anybody else.  He does not take into consideration his followers feelings at all and just says 'get over it'.  His subordinates have major issues with humans as they have killed the families of nearly everyone they know and the MC just does not care.  Granted, this could be because he was human originally but it comes across as a little kid sticking his fingers in his ears while screaming, "Lalalalala!!!  I can't hear you" so that he does not have to deal with the situation.  3)the MC is a pretty big pervert. While it never explicitly states how old the MC is, I get the impression of someone who is at least late 20s or older.  Because he is a tree now, he thinks its perfectly okay to ogle 2 little girls who are bathing in the lake.  From the wording of the chapters, I was under the impression of 10-11 year olds who looked like they were 13-14 years old.  I might be wrong, but that is how it came across to me.  4)The grammar is not great.  I would have to go back and reread certain sections a few times until I could finally piece together the meaning of the sentence.  5) I noticed that the author made it a pay to read starting at chapter 43.  I am having issues getting through to chapter 33 without any real story or character development. I refuse to pay to read the rest of this. 6) There is no real guideline on how  the MC can actually improve himself.  What I mean by this, is that at the end of the very linear growth (at least where I am at), the system says he now needs to evolve.  That is all well and good, but a chapter or two later, the MC decides to strengthen his roots and become immune to fire. At what point did the MC have the ability to perform this.  It seemed to crop out of nowhere.I think this is all I have for right now.  Again, I feel like this could be a really great story concept, but a number of issues need to be addressed.

i think its boring, also what is the point of making the mc's class need 10 times more xp to level up if the author is going to give him an 10x xp boost immediately after anyways. If you like OP and fast growing mc and don't mind low quality writing you can consider reading it.

Author here,Wrote this since I am a huge fan of battlemance novels or Battle RomanceThis book has equal parts battle and romance. Since I can't say arem less it gets censored. I'll omit the h.This arem will get huge, but the Mcs wives will forever remain at 3.Everyone in this story will have a arem or will be part of a arem. And large scale battles for the arems will be the norm. But a large portion will also focus on the main cast the mc and his three wives. This book is chuuni so cringe with me as we self insert.This book is written by Me, so characters with actual development is necessary.This book already has a set end so it won't go on forever. I write with the end in mind so the plot should be tight and without plot holes.I hope you guys enjoy the initial 30 chapter release. I plan to release 1 chapter a day afterwards. I have ps targets so hit them if you want more. Should I get contracted I will add GT targets as well. Stay awesome and enjoy the read. Here is a picture of my writing buddies.

I got curious because of the word 'Card' in title, although I didn't expect much. To my surprise I got hooked up. It may not be able to compare to Lord of the Mysteries but it's fine read. MC is comical chap full of mischief. He isn't obsessed with revenge and killing but he retaliates when you hit his sore spot (you'll get what I mean if you read chapter 60) and does so in funny and creative way. That's all I can say for now with only 60 chapters to read. World building is not clear yet but so far so good. Expecting introduction of his sister soon and his reaction toward her. I haven't made much reviews so far but I forced myself this time because I want to continue reading this novel and this might help.

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yea this is it                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

He Lan who had been sleeping woke up, when he opened his eyes he realized that Xia Lin was no longer there.

Thanks for the chapter😊