Couldn't get very far on this one. Too fast passed, too bland, and too self indulging. The writing didn't build up anything worth paying attention to and even if I was gonna get intrigued by something the end point to whatever it is would have whizzed past me before I could finish getting interested.
Well done. I have read a few stories that are inspired by games structures but this is the first that has a well-thought plot with a flow and suspense without relying too much on game characteristics. Keep writing and best of luck
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The story of the young Leo was an amazing experience for me because of your work I was hoping for you to make another one or continue the series. Please continue your work I hope to see more
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