Transmigrated as an NTR’ed protagonist.

If you have any questions regarding the story I would try and answer them in the replies of this review.
Now to the review. It's hard to assess your, own work. I won't give myself all five starts for everything and think that I'm the best. I'm not confident in my writing skill, but I hope that it's on the average level. I won't be able to update the novel frequently and write more than three chapters a week because of my work. Right now this is a hobby. The story development, characters, worldbuilding, all may be unnecessarily slow-paced or written without appropriate attention.
Yet I hope that someone would find this story attractive and enjoyable.
I don't need powerstones, if you want, you can spend them on a more deserving novel. I don't need hollow five-star reviews that don't describe the novel, but I would appreciate any, review, even one-star. As long as it describes what and where I should change and improve, ups and downs of this story.

anyone else too scared to read this - like god forbid the writing is good and I empathize with the MC. If you take the plunge lmk if the pain was worth it

I read until chapter 19 and I can say that you don't need to be intimidated of the NTR'ed title because so far the NTR is only the background of the character before MC was transmigrated, so for anyone who wants to give a shot but is scared, you can jump head-on without fear, BUTTTT I don't recommend this novel at all. MC is more pathetic than the famous 'Japanese beta MC' hell he even makes them look good (and I thought it was impossible)

Writing: 4 stars
Stability: 2 stars
Story Dev: 1 star
Character: 0 stars
World background: 3 stars
= 2.2


The release rate is **** too.
a waste of time.

If you guys are looking for the netori, harem and r18 stuff might have to wait till this reach 100 chaps.

mc character growth is just too strange for someone that was essentially an otaku. Too much self identity crisis and mc is still stuck in thinking in the norm when he is pretty much in a ntr game. The moral thing is just getting annoying at this point, contradicting thoughts that just annoys me or most readers.

This is slow paced but don't central this around just the mc since it got boring reading it. Like adding about world building and how that world works from his research in his PC would probably help the mc make solid decisions.

Cause from all the chapters so far, he gets pissed most of the time like as if a stick got stuck in his ass when given some info from his "friends". The big events so far that should have boost his character growth a lot, always have a reason to revert him back to normalcy thinking. It was already annoying at the beginning but now it's 45 chapters and little changed other than his physical attributes.

Especially the revenge part where he thought this plan and how he was really gonna ruin this girl and even brags about how he will do it right from those shitty "revenge" stories he read in his previous world. Instead we get something that missed that claim..... it would be better if the author never added those sentences/reference cause it just made the mc even more unbearable.

it may make sense realistic wise but God dam is it an annoying/bad story telling. Nothing is really note worthy that would hook the reader because of the "slow pace" and the 2 chapters or so of r18 text are probably what 90% of the reader cared about.

The slow pace is just hard to pull off and may need to really amp his character. Cause at this point, you can just skip/skim chapters and probably won't miss anything important.

First let me say this,
I HATE NTR WITH MY LIFE!!!
THIS STORY IS GOOOOOD
MC OBVIOUSLY ISNT NORMAL IN THE HEAD
AND ONCE AGAIN I HATE NTR WITH MY LIFE!!!!!!
But still 5 stars

Writing quality 4

Story development 3

Character design 2

Updating stability- I guess it depends but I give a 3 stars.

World backround 4.

I'm not really an expert in terms of reviewing works but I'm still going to give my opinion?I guess.

Writing Quality is decent and readable, although there's some grammatical errors It was still fine. I like the writing style based 1st person perspective so I give 4 stars.

The story development for me is pretty off that's why I just gave 3 stars in this aspect. The story is very slow paced and It makes the reader feel bored. Me personally like slow pace to catch up the details and some stuffs. But slowing the progress too match will leave the bad taste to those people reading it. I highly suggest to learn how to control the pacing, Fast , Slow and etc to assure the reader is still in the story.

Character development is really not good for my opinion. At first I thought he was just a chill guy wanting peace and sort of playing video games with his friend. But after some events it was highly showed the he is the most loser , beta mc that I've ever read in my whole life. His personality is really sucks like in a bad way that it affects the readers mind. His decision is hilarious to the point I want to beat him up. I think It's okay to make him like a average person....but too much and making him like a sore loser just holding the potential of the story. At first he was bullied so he will decide to change into a new different person but still after all the things happened he just become more and more trash. He was aware the fact his friend is having *** behind his back making fool of him. I like the idea that the mc didn't care but what did he do?He played with them like a fool and it really look like stupid in my opinion. I don't want to offend the author of this story but It's been a while since I became frustated at the stupidity of a person.He can just avoid talking with that so called friends of him especially Jet, this kid is not a friend at all. He was just acting and making fun of the mc behind the back and thinking how superior he is by doing malicious things with the girls that close to him.


Ps: I'm not starting argument I'm just stating what I feel about the story so far so please go easy on me and don't take it as an personal insult. Everyone has the right to do what they want to do , right what they want and I really respect the efforts of the authors sharing their thoughts and imagination

wtf is up with the title, and u said Korean so I'm guessing mc will get ntred here too right................................................................................................................

I don't really write reviews(since I don't really know how to write one )but since I like this story and I wanna let the author know that there are people who always check if there is a chapter update(i'm one of them) I'mma just write it anyways.

First thing I wanna say is about  the title, which majority of the people question about, which in my opinion there's really nothing you have to worry about.
Ok going into the story, I think the author did a great job, for instance I really like the character development of the mc and how he writes the fight scenes(very well written in my opinion),the training and the interaction between the mc and other characters.
For the chapters that I've read so far, it  was good.But now I just wanna binge read the chapters where the mc takes revenge(I would really love it if the author could bring out more chapters on a daily basis but than again I don't wanna rush him for quantity over quality).

So what I want to say is give this story a chance/try and you might find yourself staying till the end,(which is probably not ending anytime soon) like me. I came for the cover of the book but stayed because of the story which the author clearly had put effort into.