I like the way author develop character. MC childish and naïve mindset tempered by world setting. This is not a story of righteousness. This is a story about MC journey to accomplish what he want. Everything explained rationally. Inspirational story.
Sometimes I feel physically tired of the translation work and sometimes I'm encouraged by the passionate readers like you guys. But all in all, I feel good to be with you, my readers.
This is amazing I really like it. You described everything so well that it seems to be real. I liked the character of Daniel he is epitome of matureness. You write so good keep it up.
Novel isn’t bad but it is basically a copy of several other novels of take disciples to get stronger. Now my complaints are the novel is redundant in a lot of its sentences. The examples of this are when it says the mc took bottles of mixtures to make a mixture that is poisonous and another blatant one was the enemy is very powerful and its defense is shockingly powerful
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $250 advance by joining the contest.
Balanced pacing. I don't feel bored yet I don't feel exhausted. I just hope that there would be more chapters uploaded soon. Thank you. Congratulations author!
Popular Reviews